今天要來練習雅思寫作的第二部分,我個人認為這題目是非常有趣的一個題目,因為很多護理師都想要考雅思出國當護理師(可能是臺灣的護理師環境真的不好),所以出國的時候就很有可能被外國的研究所的教授問這些問題,今天就來試著練習寫寫看這篇作文!
題目:
Some people believe that nurses should not have to pay for their nursing degrees.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(From IELTS Simon website)
審題小提醒
很多人可能會想很多,就會開始幫他們想解決方案,政府付錢還是醫院付錢等等,可是這裡的題目是問你同不同意,所以你要專注在「你同不同意護士不用付學費」的這件事情上,並且給出原因。
大綱
首段:
第一句:主旨(很多人認為護士不用付學費)
第二句:雖然很多人覺得護士太重要不用付學費,但是我不同意
第二段:
第一句:他們不應該被排除付學費因為他們畢業後又不是都當護士。
第二句:很多其他工作也需要護理相關技能
第三句:他們還是可以賺錢
第四句:舉例(我朋友當空姐,三個月就把學貸還完了)
第五句:護理學生還是可以找到高薪工作來還學貸
第三段:
第一句:學生都應該付學費
第二句:學校要付老師和員工薪水
第三句:學校也要買設備,讓學生學習怎麼使用
第四句:還要付錢給醫院讓護理學生實習
第五句:學生身為使用者就是要付錢。
結論:
第一句:免學費不是一個好方法,他們畢業又不一定當護士,而且學生應該真的要付錢。
練習寫作
It is sometimes argued that students in universities of nursing should be exempt from tuition fees. While people may think that nurses are one of the most important workers in our society so that they do not need to pay for their tuition, I still disagree with this statement, for the reasons described below.
Student nurses should not be exempt from the tuition fees the universities of nursing charge because they might not be a nurse after graduating. Some other jobs, such as flight attendants and private carers working for affluent families, might still need the skills they learn from school. They can still earn money with the skills they learn at the universities of nursing. For example, one of my friends, working as a flight attendant, paid all the loans she borrowed to study at a nursing school three months after she graduated from a nursing college. It is not that difficult for nursing students to find high-paid jobs and pay for their loans after graduating.
Furthermore, students should always pay for their learning and the services from the universities. Universities of nursing should pay for tutors and administration workers. They might also need to buy a huge number of new equipment and medical devices to let students use and learn with. Moreover, they might need to pay some private hospitals to have internship programmes for students, from which students can learn how to work as a nurse in real situations. The students are the ones who receive these services so that they should pay for it.
In conclusion, I believe that free tuition is not a good way because not every student in nursing schools will be a nurse and students should really pay for the services they receive from the universities. (290 words, band 6.5-7)
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