雅思寫作-身體段的架構

很多學生在練習雅思的時候,都不太清楚身體段的段落應該要長什麼樣子,但是畢竟身體段落兩段加起來可能會有200字,佔整篇作文的五分之四,所以今天就想來分享身體段的段落應該要長什麼樣子。

首先還是要在構想大綱的時候,就要根據自己所想出來的點子做出不同樣的規劃,我覺得根據自己想出來的點子數量可以有不同樣的樣子。

非常有梗,想出了三個點子的段落

這樣的段落我會建議使用 Firstly, Secondly, Finally, … 的寫法,他就會長下面這個樣子。

主題句:有三個主要的理由。
第二句:Firstly, 理由一
第三句:Secondly, 理由二
第四句:Finally, 理由三

上面其中一個理由,可以加上舉例或是延伸說明,讓自己這個段落有延伸的感覺。

範例參考:

There are several reasons why people might argue that homework is an unnecessary burden on children. Firstly, there is evidence to support the idea that homework does nothing to improve educational outcomes. Countries such as Finland, where school children are not given homework, regularly top international educational league tables and outperform nations where setting homework is the norm. Secondly, many parents would agree that the school day is already long enough, and leaves their children too tired to do further study when they return home. Finally, it is recognised that play time is just as beneficial as study time from the perspective of brain development.

From IELTS Simon Website

想到了兩個梗

這樣的段落我會建議使用 Furthermore, … 的寫法,他就會長下面這個樣子。

主題句:有 A 和 B 是主要理由。
第二句:A怎樣怎樣
第三句:舉例或說明
第四句:Furthermore, B怎樣怎樣
第五句:舉例或說明

竟量一個用舉例一個用說明,才會有你延伸很厲害的感覺。

範例參考:

There are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to allow people to be paid extremely high salaries. If companies offer excellent pay packages, they can attract the most talented people in their fields to work for them. For example, technology companies like Google are able to employ the best programmers because of the huge sums that they are willing to pay. Furthermore, these well-paid employees are likely to be highly motivated to work hard and therefore drive their businesses successfully. In theory, this should result in a thriving economy and increased tax revenues, which means that paying high salaries benefits everyone.

From IELTS Simon Website

完全想不到,只有一個梗

這樣的段落我會建議使用延伸法。

主題句:最主要的理由就是XXX。
第二句:延伸說明
第三句:繼續延伸說明
第四句:舉例
第五句:XXX 就是主要理由

範例參考:

In my view, a new recycling law would be just one possible way to tackle the waste problem. Governments could make it a legal obligation for householders to separate all waste into different bins. There could be punishments for people who fail to adhere to this law, ranging from a small fine to community service, or even perhaps prison sentences for repeat offenders. These measures would act as a deterrent and encourage people to obey the recycling law. As a result, the improved behaviour of homeowners could lead to a clean, waste-free environment for everyone.

From IELTS Simon Website

我覺得這些寫法裡面,最重要的還是要先有規劃的過程,在寫作之前如何地把文章架構和大綱整理好,是一個非常重要的步驟。

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