雅思寫作-學生應該要學音樂樂器嗎？

今天要練習雅思的寫作，今天的題目是來自 IELTS Simon 的網站。

Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
題目來自 IELTS Simon 官網

先來構思一下

在寫作之前最重要的就是，我們要來構思一下我們要寫正面的還是反面的，我一項都認為在寫作的時候罵別人比較容易，所以不管我個人本身是怎麼認為這件事情的，在簡短的思考過程中和有限的時間要寫完這篇作文，我都會先採取反方的姿態為主。

既然決定了自己的立場是不同意，讓我們就要來想一下我們要怎麼拼湊我們的文章。

首先我們很快地就可以把頭尾寫出來，因為這樣段是我們整篇文章的架構。

第一段：
主旨：有些人認為學生應該要學音樂樂器。
意見：我反對。

第四段：
結論：我反對學生應該要在學校學樂器。

頭尾都想好之後就要開始想身體了

身體就要花比較多時間去構思，因為這跟我們的連貫性和切題性會有很大的關係，所以我們先想一下我們有什麼東西可以寫，再來把細部的東西放上去。

我這次的兩段主軸打算寫說：「學音樂很貴對某些家庭很貴」和「有些學生就是沒興趣和沒天份」

上面那兩句話就會是我的主題句，我現在要想四句支持句來支持他們。

1. 學音樂對某些家庭很貴

• 學生回家要練習學校學習的東西，父母就要買樂器給他們
• 我朋友爸爸媽媽花很多錢買鋼琴給他練習
• 那些錢對我們家來說就太多了，所以我沒有學樂器。
• 有些家庭就是無法負擔

2. 有些學生就是沒興趣和沒天份

• 他的興趣在跑步和游泳
• 對他來說很難靜下來學樂器
• 他的天份在畫畫
• 應該要多畫畫

想完這些梗之後，我們可以怎麼把它拼在一起。

練習寫作：

Some people in the education industry believe that all children should learn a musical instrument at school. I can’t entirely agree with this statement due to several reasons.

It might be rather expensive to learn music for some low-income families. Students need to practice playing the musical instrument at home so that their parents might need to buy the instrument they may not be able to afford. For example, it cost my friends’ parents fifty thousand pounds to buy a piano at home to let my friend practise his homework from his piano class at school. This amount of money was way too much for my parents; therefore, I did not choose to learn a musical instrument. Hence, learning a musical instrument can be unaffordable for some families.

In my opinion, some children do not have an interest in music or the talent for music so it might be harsh for them if music is a compulsory subject. It takes a considerable amount of time to learn to play a musical instrument. It may be somewhat challenging for some students interested in running or swimming to sit quietly and practise playing a musical instrument for several hours. Furthermore, some other students cannot learn music because they do not have the gifts. It might be great if they spend their time on some things they are good at, such as drawing or taking pictures.

In conclusion, I would argue that learning music might be beneficial for some students; however, I do not believe that all children should learn to play a musical instrument. (262 words)

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