雅思寫作-公司垃圾的小作文

今天要來練習雅思的小作文!小作文寫得好,對於雅思寫作的分數來說,一定會有所幫助!但是很多人可能會忽略小作文的重要性,今天我們就來練習吧!

from IELTS Simon 官網

大綱:

主旨

大重點:AB下降,C上升

小重點:一開始B跟C上升,A一直下降

小重點:B後來一直下降,C持續往上升

練習:

The line graph compares how much waste three companies produced between the years 2000 and 2015.

It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies. Companies A and B saw waste output falling over the fifteen-year period; however, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.

In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes respectively. Company A produced less waste in the following years and produced fewer than 9 tonnes in 2015.

The waste output produced by companies B and C increased by about 2 tonnes. There was a dramatic decrease in the waste output produced by company B from over 9 tonnes to 3 tonnes between 2005 and 2015, a significant drop in 10 years. However, company C produced more and more waste in the following ten years to around 10 tonnes.

(157 words, band 6.5-7)

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